Grammar Sunday: The Case of the Misplaced Modifier by: Stephanie Dionne

Often, when we write, we use modifiers to help describe a word or phrase. For example, a gold watch. The word gold is modifying the word watch.

A misplaced modifier is a word, phrase or clause that is improperly separated from the word it modifies/describes. 

Because of the separation, sentences with this error often sound awkward, ridiculous or confusing. Furthermore, they can be downright illogical. 

  • Example: Driving home late last night, a deer suddenly appeared in my headlights. (So the deer has a license, does he?)
  • Correct: Driving home late last night, I saw a deer suddenly appear in my headlights.
  • Wrong: Three bicycles were reported stolen by the police. (You just can’t trust those darn police!)
  • Correct: The police reported that three bicycles were stolen.

 

So when you’re writing, be sure to read your work out loud to yourself. Often, misplaced modifiers are easier to catch when heard.

 

Ciao Bella,

Stephanie